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帖子 由 hong.ying 于 周日 02 八月 2009, 10:21 pm

Wheeeeeeeep! = )
Come on guys,Let say HI to my first PosT in this Zone!
but I really don't have any SHIT to post.
And my english is very poor,
Unlike u,KaeHow
U're so good,charming in eveything.
But,I'm apparently so,really unlike u,I'm lack of confidence.
What to write?
KaeHow say Anything..
Ok..Let talk about today,
School was insane today!
Keep driving us fringe!FRINGE!!
*fcking fainting*
Keep warning us
To Have a short hair!
I'm so unbearable such thing they done to us..
Last Week They Cut My Hair..
Ofcoz My Fellow Friend..
All the boy in 5science become monk= (
I know that scking teacher juz felt jealous of our good-look apperance
F**ing Moktar!
Why is he so jealous?
Sry a..
Curse him can ease my tension and hatred,
Some of the boy in my Class still feeling blue since they's Baby hair were been cut!
Here's a creepy + shocking news,
A disaster will happend tomoror
both of the non-muslim-beatiful-longhair-girl will be spot check tomoror,
God..
I'm sincerely Wish they wont be ruin by the Sck***,
I hate Them!
ARGhhhhhhh!


I'm think the time is not suitable now.
Time jealous of us. Bye.
will be posting new articles very soon ;D
Sorry for Grammatic Error..
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帖子 由 Endofworld 于 周日 02 八月 2009, 10:24 pm

well , thank you for posting the first article , and yeah . whenever you're secondary school you'll feel it's disastrous to cut your hair short , but now i enjoy my short hair , feel fresh and look smart =)

hope you will find it out soon~ cheer!

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帖子 由 Endofworld 于 周四 06 八月 2009, 1:38 pm

but I really don't have any SHIT to post.
But i don't really have <--- just my own opinion

I'm lack of confidence.
I'm lacking of confidence

KaeHow say Anything..
KaeHow says/said anything

I'm so unbearable such thing they done to us..
I was so unberable such things they have done to us

All the boy in 5science become monk= (
All the boys in 5 science became monk

I know that scking teacher juz felt jealous of our good-look apperance
I knew that scking teacher was jealous of our... <--my own opinon , instead of saying just felt better than we use was jealous~


Some of the boy in my Class still feeling blue since they's Baby hair were been cut!
Some of the boy(s) feel blue since their baby hair have been cut~

I'm think the time is not suitable now.
I think the time is not

will be posting new articles very soon ;D
i'll post new articles very soon



Well , those are the grammatical errors that i spotted , hope that you'll receive it with open minded , and yeah , we're here to make mistakes , and to improve ourself =)

So don't feel ashame to post your article here , maybe i'm not that good in spoting the errors , but i hope i can help you too =)

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